Monday, November 16, 2009

"Adhura Panna "

"Naaz -o- andaaz se kehte hai ki jeena hoga......
zeher bhi dete hai aur kehte hain ki peena hoga....
jab main peeta hu to kehte hai ki marta bhi nahi.......
jab main marta hu to kehte hai ki jeena hoga........."

upar likhi panktiya padh kar to aapko andaaza aa hi gaya hoga ki main kya jatana chahta ...
dar asal ye ghazal maine apne ek bahut hi azeez dost ke liye likhi hai .......
aksar aisa hota hai ki hum do dost apne haal-e-dil aur beete hue kal aur aane wale kal ko lekar kashmakash me hoti hai aur suljhate suljhate poori raat beet jati hai ...isi tarah aur ek baar der raat tak baithe the hum aur is baar ye nazm likhne ki inspiration mujhe ek to upar likhi 4 lines se mili aur doosri us hi azeez dost ke zind-e-daur se mili...kuch likhe ki koshish hai aur isme bhi aapko ku
ch kacche pakke toote hue marasim ke tukde numaya dikhenge.

kal raat doston ke saath ek shaam bitane ke baad ye likhne ki aas umdi .....
to pesh hai ek koshish........




saaqi, aaj kal wo phir se aane lage hai hamaare khwaab me,
lagata hai, wo pehle jaisa asar nahi raha teri sharaab me.

unhone hi mujhe is aakhari manzil tak pohchaya hai saaqi,
jo raah me kabhi mile the hame, ham-safar ke naqaab me.

tujhe maan nevaalo se main darta hu, isiliye chup hu, varna
o khuda, maine to bahut si kamiyaa paai hai tere hisaab me.

naam, izzat, shauharat, javaani....aur na jaane kya kya...
yaaroN, ye sab doob ke beh gaya waqt ke ek hi sailaab me.

Doston.., shauk se sawaal pe sawaal kiye jaao ham se,
"J......"... gazalo par gazale likhataa rahega javaab me."


-------------------------Ek Simat Ta Shoonya --------------------

3 comments:

  1. you are just tooooo gooood..!!
    i loved this one....
    the pre poem stuff almost got me a shiver..!!

    gr8 work bro.!!
    tkcr :)

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  2. Hmmmmmm Bro ........ Well said and yes it hurts

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